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Seven Words

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06.12.2004
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seven words


	Submitted by Ryan When I'm with you, eternity is a step away, my love continues to grow, with each passing day. This treasure of love, I cherish within my soul, how much I love you, you'll never really know. You bring a joy to my heart, I've never felt before, with each touch of your heart, I love you more and more. Whenever we say goodbye, whenever we part, know I hold you dearly, deep inside my heart. So these seven words, I pray you hold true, "Forever and Always, I will Love You."

Rebecca

1306 days ago Reply

i hope you can take constructive critisism. I liked you poem a lot, but I felt like you were forcing the rhymes. You should just let it flow, and be natural with it, don't focus so much on how it rhymes but how you feel. Sorry that's just my opinion.

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